Very Good, OK a little tip for depth, drawing background will give more depth even a little graphite dust rubbed in. Also When doing hair in pulling strokes dragging a putty rubber through hair can look like shine. Darken the areas under hair here clearly the left is the dark side and right the liight shading should be to that side even in the hair, I like the small marks or facial lines under the nose on the crown of the fulcrum there is also a line to the lower lip and chin protrusion. Right side of the nose a little lighter. Skills, techniques and tricks to learn. My favourite painter is Frenchman Edgar Degas. He said 'Art is not what you see, but what you make others see'!
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Nicely captured her pretty look!

Thanks
Very Good, OK a little tip for depth, drawing background will give more depth even a little graphite dust rubbed in. Also When doing hair in pulling strokes dragging a putty rubber through hair can look like shine. Darken the areas under hair here clearly the left is the dark side and right the liight shading should be to that side even in the hair, I like the small marks or facial lines under the nose on the crown of the fulcrum there is also a line to the lower lip and chin protrusion. Right side of the nose a little lighter. Skills, techniques and tricks to learn. My favourite painter is Frenchman Edgar Degas. He said 'Art is not what you see, but what you make others see'!

I love Degas! I also like Rockwell and Pacaso