Love your illustration very good!!!!

i really don't like it, seriously

Good, I've come along to have a look at your work. You draw well, I can regognise the people which is what its about. Not liking it is different, even after my many years sometimes I do painting and I don't like it. Yours has small errors, mainly in the setting out (the start) even though I paint quickly I spend ages deciding what, where and how then I study what it will look like on the paper. Ten years ago this took hours, now minutes. I've done many drawings of her not as good as yours. Positives it is full of light, your style is uncomplicated no heavy shading, you have all the basic features right. Now for the changes next time, the distance between mouth and nose (the fulcrum) is correct but the length of the nose is slightly to long. right eye should be the centre of the paper is slightly to far away from the nose. Hair, eyes, scarf. lips, eyebrows, and beauty spot all very good, far more good's than poors. So two slight errors at the begining have upset you.