Good, Another where the highlighting draws the eye from the good drawing. Right shoulder is to high even if it was on a photograph, it makes him have no neck. Leave out the collar and its a very good drawing. I bet you hate me!

hate you no, i really appreciate your constructive critisism, its very easy getting carried away when i have my drawings on 2 sites with nothing but complimentry comments, so its good when someone like yourself takes the time to really have a good look and tell me my weak points and strong points,thats got to be what its all about, so thankyou for your advice and honesty, me and my daughter have been looking at your gallery and have been totally blown away, your work is absolutly amazing, thanx again and sure we will be talking again soon, got typing cramp now ha ha