Very good, likeness and shading very good OK and I even like the Butterflies. I notice you shaded the left side a little to get a apearance ofdark to show th faace better also the slight darkening of the left behind the head helped I hope after my advise. If an accident it was very good. A little higher on the centre I was taught that the centre should either be the eyes or the piece between the mouth and nose which itr called the fulcrum. Here it's just a little low. It's to do with the viewers eye meeting the canvas or paper. Very good again and getting better.
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