Very good, great face colouring, wrong paper it looks like heavy water colour pattern paper. Dark on left and light on right the oppersite to face shading, also just on the left were the hair goes up the background should lighten to make the hair look darker with no extra colouring. also I would have left the right side finish at the dark edge this would have made it look more dramatic. The colour tones are excellent, white tone just a spot in the eye. This shows you can paint it's a little more work on presentation but excellent work.

thanks a lot

très joli!!!!