Excellent, I like it, great work on the beard, I have one so I notice. Good light on face the pupils and Iris of the eye could be a little better, but the rest is excellent. Lips are done like little strips of pencil this will show more shadow they should as wriggly, and the top is a little diferent. Think of the shadow, not the links on the chain, the same with the cross, try to be a little more impressionist! it will work, trust me. I would have cut out the left eye alltogether. Saying all that excellent a good drawing I'm just fusy and boring.

Very good!!