You have potential so keep up the good work!!

Good portrait of Billie!

Thanks

Very good, just a tad out on the shadow top eyelid to pupil great light though the hand is a bit out Very very good work. Try leaving a little more white paper on cheeks and forehead. it is less to shade and less is more. When doing the drawing for a project, say art school I would not draw the shadong on the hand and be very light with the outline the hand onto the face is very good. Try being more light and letting the viewer put thing in for themselves. An excellent improvement. You have great talent. Please forgive me making comments I always want to help.

no no its fine, i always like to hear an honest opinion, and i will remember all of your tips for the next time i draw, thanks for your help !