Excellent, very difficult piece to get right, the hands being the tricky bit. Very good depth on face and hair the neck and shoulder are Ok but not great. I think the concentration of a portrait should be at the most either beautiful or interesting part, Here I would have done the same face and head centering the eye at the middle then like you making a realy good drawing of the face but blurring and the hands and neck. Mind what do I know, the part to look at are done from practice when I was your age I was not as talented or good as you. I practiced and practiced and it paid off even now I do 2 hours a day. Welcome an excellent start as you can see I'm a bit of a windbag but I do give good advise. Brian.
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