Excellent, draw another and add red lenses.

Thank you! It was my very first portrait, so darkness is missing I think

It's a Good Drawing, Although you can see it others can't, because its so dark the shine on the corner of the glasses does not show very well. On new work lighten the back ground and this will enable you to use either the white paper or a rub out piece to show as bright white. Or tell me I’m an old ???? and mind my own business

Yes that's true thanks a lot for the advice, it helps me to become better (I hope my english isn't too bad to understand )

It's excellent, kept drawing and then painting.

Muy buen trabajo

Thanks a lot! It was my first drawing