Very good, a good start the light side is excellent, but the dark side is to busy try using a block of Graphite it give a darker and more even finish saying that its very good. A tip for faces is to use your fingers to apply the shade and under shade womens faces. Good compossion and likeness. Youv'e drawn the arm and shoulder excellently most people who draw have problems with limbs. With her hair on the right hand side it would have been mind blowing. Lets us have another.

P's try to avoid putting you name on them stick to a pen name. Think safely