Good, Your idea is excellent but you need a little help to make your Excellent eye for composer catch up with your drawing ability. First the idea is the greatest part of a drawing. The second is the drawing or painting within OUR ability. A last knowing when to finish. In the drawing above yet again the Two heads are excellent. The liner is excellent so why tell the viewer it's the Titanic or the names of the people. Your drawing is good enough to tell its own story. PS Also on this website I never date or sign my real name to a painting, put it on the back SAFETY first. Sorry to be such an old critic but I would not give you advise if I didn’t think you had talent.

Thank you very much! Don't be sorry for your advice 'caus they are very good.So thank you for them.