Great choice of actor and the composition is excellent. I hope you don't mind if I suggest something as an old hand, Instead of showing the eyes be more abstract in the eye area, large for detail, small for mood and feel. Make the viewer work harder, with just a hint of the eyes playing to the shadow. Then I would in my mind recreate more likeness to see. It’s not always DETAIL that has the Wowwww, factor. Very good.

thanks for the advice and the compliment

Very Nice!

thank you