Very good, Ok advise drop writing on the portrait, their not cartoons as their not drawn as cartoons. The Likeness is very good. You lack a little with technique but basic talent you have. Try to understand the two main parts of drawing: Light and dark and alowing the viewer to see thins in your work. You a sa little heavy on the face leave out more use the white of the paper to show light. You draw excellent eyes but be a little more imprssionist not every eyelash needs to be drawn. Basic ey drawing is very good study the shape and parts of an eye: corners, pupil, Iris, eyelids upper and lower the shine in the corner from the water and their postioning. Teeth the distision between lip and glum the fact that it's the lower shade between the teeth. Ok thats alot to take on board I only say this to help and make you better than you are now which is very good. Remember it's pratice and patience that are the main things. Brian.
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