Good, a tip Don't put the photo on the portrait with your work, as it will distract the eye of the viewer, to not looking at your work. If you have to have a photo? make it smaller. Ok very good eyes a little more darkness in the lips good shape though. You will have to master the technique of smuggling to get the skin tones it is possible to use stokes of a pencil but time consuming. First save all the old pencil lead ( the centre bit) then crush make into dust then practice applying to paper with say tissue or a piece of cloth say felt, it is a build up thing to learn it will not come start away but keep practicing. also buy putty rubber. Very good the learning of drawing is very exciting as there are many techniques to learn and help is hard to find. I am always willing to help if you want.