you know i like it , i like the eyes a lot pretty portrait ,

Yes I do , but you know that i don't like my portraits and i like to say negative stuff , but that's the way i feel But thanks sister

Very good, OK i've had a look at her Laura P. First the skin tone is very good hair good face shape a little out, lips are excllent. You seem to know the problem but continue to draw it no eyelids 30% to big which is not a lot, I feel that it's more of a style now a statment, to become different or draw more conveitly is not perhaps your aim if so I have no problem many painters do this, so many of your faces are very good even excellent. If the size is to stay the same then make the iris better the shine in the eye stan out more by darkening the background. Try planing out drawings more, improve the things you do well. I would like to teach you with you sat along side me so we can talk the work, this is wer you say why and what your doing as you go. I teach and I am taught, we all like to do our own thingI just want you to do them better. Brian.

Thank you so much for your advice . You are totally right about everything and the face shape is a little out , i agree I try to keep practicing So you mean the shine in the eyes - it could be stand out ? Sorry i am not very good in English Anyway , i know what you meant , i got almost every word Thank you so much .

Thank you , my friend Chantal

Don't put yourself down, this is really great!!

Thank you

Thank you so much

This portrait is not very bad at all! i think its very good .

suht halb ikka , aitäh