very very nice

nice, congratulations Denise

Good, basic drawing technique is to show light and dark leading the eye into believing that it sees depth. This drawing is on the right lines. To show this you must practice not only drawing what you see but leaving out parts or leaving darkness the lower part of your drawing although it is to cover up something it allows me the viewer to project my thoughts on it. The hair is good and I new who it was straight away so top marks there the right eye is not as good as the left but a little more mystery by covering it with the hair would have worked. Facial stubble again OK lips and nose OK Buy a small cheap roll of masking tape and before you get a little carried away put masking tape on the eye shine and lip shine and any where the paper has to stay white. Have ago a a Marilyn Manson he to is Iconic and easily recognisable. Why I like this work is that it makes me think rather than just looking. Well Done, Brian